After the mini crit that we had one of the points that arose was that the 3rd leaf didn't fit in with the other two. Above shows two more painted leaves that I have done in response to the feedback. The top one although it is ascetically pleasing it doesn't fit in with the other two previous because it has finer dark likes for detail of the skeleton of the leaf where as the others have been scratched out. It also has a neater and darker outline which contains the colour rather than loose messy edges. The second leaf fits in much better with the other two leafs and also helps to link the colours together as the first leaf is green into yellow and the last is red to browns. This is pulling both leaves together to form a set of three.
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